Team — here’s the near-final narrative for the Q4 launch page. I took a pass at the hero copy yesterday and I think we’re close: the story now leads with speed, not features.

Two things I’d love eyes on before Thursday:

1. The headline — “The fastest way through email.” Does it land? It’s short on purpose; I’d rather we under-write this than over-write it.
2. The triage section. Right now it explains Split Inbox in three sentences. If we can’t explain it in three, we don’t understand it yet.

Everything else is detail — open questions are marked in the doc. Shout if anything reads loud.

— E.